Shadow Walker, chapter 5.

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Re: Shadow Walker, chapter 5.

Post by DrGonzo » Mon Jun 01, 2009 3:38 am

Thanks Fel
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Re: Shadow Walker, chapter 5.

Post by GBLW » Mon Jun 01, 2009 3:39 am

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Re: Shadow Walker, chapter 5.

Post by nicolai » Mon Jun 01, 2009 3:50 am

Yet another great chapter, Fel. Keep them coming.
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Re: Shadow Walker, chapter 5.

Post by gesit » Mon Jun 01, 2009 6:23 am

you made my day m8
great, thanks

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Re: Shadow Walker, chapter 5.

Post by zedd » Mon Jun 01, 2009 9:00 am

Great chapter Fel, Thank you.

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Re: Shadow Walker, chapter 5.

Post by crxbnt » Mon Jun 01, 2009 12:15 pm

Thanks Fel! It has been hard waiting for this.

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Re: Shadow Walker, chapter 5.

Post by padfoot » Mon Jun 01, 2009 12:55 pm

Thanks Fel!

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Re: Shadow Walker, chapter 5.

Post by Cougar2k2 » Mon Jun 01, 2009 9:50 pm

Hey thanks for the new chapter Fel... much appreciated.
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Re: Shadow Walker, chapter 5.

Post by FinalChapter » Tue Jun 02, 2009 2:41 am

You always have a new chapter when i need it most. Thank you.

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Re: Shadow Walker, chapter 5.

Post by mocha1120 » Sat Jun 06, 2009 3:59 am

Looking forward to the next chapter. I really enjoy your writing.

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Re: Shadow Walker, chapter 5.

Post by Sancria » Tue Jun 16, 2009 6:50 am

Great part, but I found a TINY error.


The sergeant was as effective with his pain stick as he was sadistic. It took a cruel, twisted man to train and practice to bring a man to the brink of passing out with a pain stick over and over, inflicting unspeakable agony, and not either be horrified by it or enjoy it. This man was the kind that enjoyed it. For how long, Kyven had no idea, he was repeatably tormented with a device whose soul function was to make someone feel like they had been cast into Hell.


did you see it? The error is the word "soul." In this case, I believe the word you wanted to use is "sole."

On a slightly off topic question, do you use the microphone to dictate the story or do you type it out?

Keep up the amazing work, you have no idea how pleased I was to see two parts out this week!
I'd gladly travel back in time, except I would have to wait longer for the next chapter of Fel's work...sorry, pass.

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