Spirit Walker, chapter 2.

[michaelsuave]

Wow thanks for another chapter... I thought you said you'd be busy for a weeks? Not that I'm complaining mind you.

I will be starting this weekend. I have a 5 page essay, a 3 page essay, a major test, and a presentation all coming due in the next 2 weeks.

I'll still work on chapter 3, but I will have other things on the plate that will slow me down.

Good luck bud, good think you have all that experiance at being a prolific writer. Hopefully it will come in handy. I wonder, have you noticed your school writing getting better/easier the more you have written for subjugation/sennadar? Best of luck and thanks for a new chapter... maybe the begging did work.

[SHALIK_TEX]

Looks like another great start to another epic adventure... Can't wait for future insallments...Thanks Fel

[dellstart]

You know this reminds me of the time when I faced the state champion pace bowler in high school...

I thought I could hit hime for six to rattle him... I did... Several times as a matter of fact

But he also hit my helmet 6 times during the innings... Ouch

Getting hit on the head by a head hunter coming to you at 130+ km/h is not something I would like to repeat especially when my teamates warned me to play it safe against that guy. At least he didn't get me on the chest

Your Warning Is Duly Noted


Mysterious

Facing a bowler that bloody quick and taking him on , takes heaps of bottle and guts. No fear is the password.Good onya
Then again you aint the only Aussie , to ever get clocked on the helmet, just ask justin Langer!

[Mizriath]

Go go go Fel.

[schunn99]

fel, another good story. just finished reading ch. 1 + 2. Good stuff. I can't wait to ch 3. graphic is a good thing. I like the whole idea of "spirit" crystals.

[TLGG]

This is your word of warning.

The "cute and fuzzy" aspect of this story ends with this chapter. From here, it will get graphic.

Graphic in all areas. The cursing will be graphic (ala Subjugation), the violence will be graphic (ala Firestaff), everything will be graphic. And yes, that means everything. If there is any depiction of sex, it will be graphic. Not gratuitous or described in second by second detail, but I won't "cutscene" away as I usually do (I'd suck at erotic writing, but any sex you see in this story will be by no means erotic.). You'll be privy to everything, and the consequences it entails.

You Have Been Warned.

Trying to compensate for the lack of faey porn I'd say . Great story, and I can foresee some tough and long hours and days waiting for the new chapters

[crxbnt]

FEL, thanks for the great effort. I hope it works as a stress reliever for you. I have 2 daughters doing finals just now. The one finds the essays and writing in general to be refreshing. The other bleeds out each word. Keep up the great work, and do well with the essays and finals.

crxbnt

[Metatrone]

Trying to compensate for the lack of faey porn I'd say . Great story, and I can foresee some tough and long hours and days waiting for the new chapters

Yeah, I only hope there are other humans where they are going otherwise instead of sexy human-faey debauchery we'll get an unhealthy amount of zoofilia...

[Fel]

omg, that's just soooo wrong on soooo many levels. I hadn't even considered it.

Thanks for the idea. Now I will make sure to attempt to melt your eyes in an upcoming chapter.

JUST FOR YOU.

[Lochar]

*sigh*

There's a reason I hadn't mentioned that.

Don't you know not to give authors and DMs any fuel in which to use?

[Metatrone]

Oh, damn, I found the idea so disturbing didn't think you consider it a plausible plot development. I knew there was a reason why Lochar's or Fifer's twisted mind hasn't presented us with this...possibility...

[DigitalMaestro]

Yeah, I only hope there are other humans where they are going otherwise instead of sexy human-faey debauchery we'll get an unhealthy amount of zoofilia...

Well... we have an interesting development now, don't we? We can find out just how humanoid the Arcans are. AND THE PUNS! the fuel I will donate is... doggy-style!

Fel, you have an entirely new realm of fun toys to play with. Don't neglect the new plethora of ammunition. I'm sure the more sensitive audience has been sufficiently warned to wear their kiddy glasses.

[Fel]

Actually, I was being slightly facetious. The idea HAD crossed my mind already.

When one intends to write dark material, one leaves no sick stone unturned.

[D.F. Thompson]

Actually, I was being slightly facetious. The idea HAD crossed my mind already.

When one intends to write dark material, one leaves no sick stone unturned.

Hehehehe all I got to say is BRING IT

Thanks Fel I can hardly wait for the next one.

[Metatrone]

Why, everyone sounds quite enthusiastic about it....