Chapter 18.

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Chapter 18.

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It'll wrap up with either the next chapter or 20, depending on how sidetracked I get with inane dialogue. ;)
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Thank you FEL!!!!

I knew checking back every twenty minutes would pay off sooner or later!

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Whoot!!!
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Whoot..
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Wow Fel. That was an awesome Christmas 4 sure! I can't wait to read about Jenny and Ben pissing off Hannah with Sheila's gifts or something. :twisted: Vil sure showed her billionaire side.

And what an awesome resort! You can't kill this universe in the next ch. I understand if u end the book, but we'll need short stories at least periodically. :D

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Huzzah!
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Yay! More reading :)
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Thank you!
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love this m8
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Yet more of Fel's tauntings of Vil up to something big concerning Kit. I've already voiced my opion of what I think will happen but I don't see how that going to happen if Fel only writes another one or two chapters unless there huge chapters, which would be awsome but probably normal size. I think it is also interesting to hear Vil mention heirs and not Kit and Jessie's. I hope there will be more on that in either later chapters or possible *crosses fingers* another story in the near or far future.

Anyway great chapter and am, as always, impressed with it. I don't know if you're still trying to think of a title for the story but I'll ad my two cents anyway, I've just been calling it "The Kitsrom Chronicles" because it is chronicling his life and if it does turn out to be a running story then you don't have to worry about what to call it.
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Very nice Fel. Can't wait to read the last ten chapters or so... :twisted:
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Thanks heaps and heaps!

woah, talk about having your pie and eating it.
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Great chapter, Fel. From the hints you've dropped, I hope there will be at least one more story in this universe. I have really enjoyed reading this one. It's a wonderful story and a fascinating universe, and it would be a shame if you left with just this one story.

The compiled version I've assembled (for my own benefit) I've given the title "A Vulpan Life", and I'll be happy to email you a copy if you'd like. (I've run spellcheck and done some minor cleanup.) You could call the series "The Vulpan Chronicles". That's easy and descriptive, if not very original. Please come back and write some more about Kit, Jessie, Vil and the gang. (One species Vil didn't name is the arctic fox. Might make an interesting tweak of a story line.)

I understand that you like to write other stories, and I enjoy them, too. I've enjoyed every word you've written, and look forward to many more.

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I better say my thanks first before reading it. Thanks Fel.

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