Chapter 13. Tuesday? HA!!!!!!

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Journeywoman wrote:The last thing I would comment on is merely for when you get to editing: put in the Bengals(?) colours. You mention the Den is decked out in the colours but not what they are. Don't assume everyone knows what they are. I for one live in Australia, don't follow Rugby or AFL, let alone American football, so have no hope in hell of knowing.
All in all I'm enjoying the book!
Just like the "Bengal" tiger colors, orange, white, and black.
http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Cincinnati_Bengals
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Even though Fel didn't give the colors in the story if anyone is especially curious as to the colors all they would have to do is google the word Bengals and the first site that comes up is the official site of the Cincinnati Bengals Football team. In my opinion, the time it would take to further explain the decor of a TV room would only add a couple of lines to the overall story but to most people from the states would be uneeded info...True some people outside the states would not know how to visualize colors they don't know but that is easily solved by lookin it up outside of the story. ..Just my Opinon on the matter...Fel keep it up great story so far.
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Fiferguy wrote: I wish you'd quit confusing me with your mom. It's really getting really annoying. I might have to see if I can't get some of the local Psions where you are to fix you a little more...
Humm I think my Two Gray Wolf friends Standing behind you would like to play..err Talk to you for a bit.
I'll see you later when they are finished


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And in our Dying, we're more alive-than we have ever been
I've lived for these few seconds
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This is not spirit. Just to see how many come and check. :p
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Mizriath wrote:This is not spirit. Just to see how many come and check. :p
Grumble Grumble

*borrows some marbles from hell to send to Mizriath*

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Mizriath wrote:This is not spirit. Just to see how many come and check. :p
At least two suckers so far. How desperate we are... :(
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ha almost got me there
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Thats almost below the belt!
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I saw chapter 13 my heart soared, then I clicked the link and fell into a deeper depression. Why must you be so cruel to the rest of us going into withdrawl. Then again misery loves company.
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Mizriath wrote:This is not spirit. Just to see how many come and check. :p
You've officially move to fist place on my list... :evil:
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I hate you


I hate you hate you I hate you.


I wish I could hate you to death.


I hate you.

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I'm not desperate I'm tired, I thought I would check forum one last time, It is 1/4 til 1 here and now I'm tired and mad. :) :| :roll: :x :evil:
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Duh.......Donuts


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And in the fury of this darkest hour
I will be your light
A lifetime for this destiny
For I am Winter born
And in this moment..I will not run
It is my place to stand
We few shall carry hope
Within our bloodied hands
(bloodied hands)
And in our Dying, we're more alive-than we have ever been
I've lived for these few seconds
For I am Winter born
The CruxShadows "Winterborn" (This Sacrifice)
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Mizriath wrote:This is not spirit. Just to see how many come and check. :p
Dude, you are cruel and heartless. I bet you tear the flesh from little animals and put what was left of them in bleach to finish the job so you will have pretty bones to make jewelry out of. Your name now is, Jeffrey Dahmer and everyone is staying FAR away from your arse. :shock: :mrgreen:
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My exact thought process:
' Chapter 13? Coo... Wait. "Tuesday? HA!!!!!!" ? Isn't that from Kit? Did somebody... yup. '
You have guts, blatantly taunting addicts like that. Especially with some of the crazy ones around here... I wonder how Fel will react to this? More to the point, I wonder how the tech-savvy Admins will react to this? *COUGHCOUGHKITTENWARCOUGHCOUGH*
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