Don't get used to this. Chapter 6.

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Thanks Fiferguy. Do you know how I can get chapters 1 and 2?
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Gracias
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Naming suggestion how about "KITCAT" wait to close to trade mark Infringement or maybe KIT for CAt? 8)
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Or perhaps " The Lone Vulpan " ..Just throwin somthin out there...
The road through life
is long and rock.
Take Plenty of Beer...
When Life throws you Limes
Break out the Salt & Tequila
And have a Party.....
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Maybe you could use a working title until you can find a more permanent one.

Might I suggest:
1. "Dammit, where's the rest of my ear?"
2. "Femmes are bad for your back" or...
3. "Pretty Kitty Little Bitty Woo-Woo"

I know...Pure Genius. You can thank me later.

Great chapter once again Fel. Looking forward to lucky number 7.
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"Family Matters" :D
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darkhand wrote:
Phantom wrote: Pulls out Jasons Bag of Tricks ....Loads up the Hello Kittys the My little ponys and the little
talked about Bratz.
Then decides to Toss in a Crate of Marbles too boot

Starts filling out the Shipping Form ...Send To: James Galloway ..humm
:shock:

Phantom
unfortunately I don't think that Jasons marbles would work real well in this world, not enough hard surfaces to bounce off of.
It doesn't have to be all that hard ...the point is they will do damage maybe not as much as other places but Still a Hole is a Hole.
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Phantom wrote:Who says we aren't ?
Blackberrys and Mobile Phones are wonderful things at times

Phantom
I don't think it warrants a personal visit yet... if it did, I think my readers would've already been camping at my door... :wink:
No the point is After all this Time ....living with the addiction and going through withdrawls for sometimes months
And We Find out he CAN write this fast .....errrrrrrrrrr. :roll: :shock:

Phantom
And in the fury of this darkest hour
I will be your light
A lifetime for this destiny
For I am Winter born
And in this moment..I will not run
It is my place to stand
We few shall carry hope
Within our bloodied hands
(bloodied hands)
And in our Dying, we're more alive-than we have ever been
I've lived for these few seconds
For I am Winter born
The CruxShadows "Winterborn" (This Sacrifice)
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Phantom wrote: No the point is After all this Time ....living with the addiction and going through withdrawls for sometimes months
And We Find out he CAN write this fast .....errrrrrrrrrr. :roll: :shock:

Phantom
Either that or he's been stockpiling stuff on us... He's probably just had this stuff sitting around for months. :P
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Fiferguy wrote:
Phantom wrote: No the point is After all this Time ....living with the addiction and going through withdrawls for sometimes months
And We Find out he CAN write this fast .....errrrrrrrrrr. :roll: :shock:

Phantom
Either that or he's been stockpiling stuff on us... He's probably just had this stuff sitting around for months. :P
I don't know Either Way he's been a BAD Cat ....aw..err Boy.

At the least I think Removal of all EQ related Items from his Residence could be warranted :lol: :P

We'll Wait and see how long it takes for the next chapter to come out :wink:

Phantom
And in the fury of this darkest hour
I will be your light
A lifetime for this destiny
For I am Winter born
And in this moment..I will not run
It is my place to stand
We few shall carry hope
Within our bloodied hands
(bloodied hands)
And in our Dying, we're more alive-than we have ever been
I've lived for these few seconds
For I am Winter born
The CruxShadows "Winterborn" (This Sacrifice)
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Dude, I play EQ twice a week...Friday and Saturday raids. That's it. ;P

It wasn't stockpiled. I CAN write quickly when I want to and I'm ready...though I was about a half a chapter to a chapter ahead on the new story. I was making sure I wasn't going to make any changes before releasing it, which is ALSO new for me. ;)

Think you don't remember the Demon's Bane rush, or the quick succession of Subjugation from 18 to 20. And I also banged out Insurrection in like record time.

I've just been more motivated than usual to write, even at the expense of sleep. ;)
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Fel wrote:Dude, I play EQ twice a week...Friday and Saturday raids. That's it. ;P

It wasn't stockpiled. I CAN write quickly when I want to and I'm ready...though I was about a half a chapter to a chapter ahead on the new story. I was making sure I wasn't going to make any changes before releasing it, which is ALSO new for me. ;)

Think you don't remember the Demon's Bane rush, or the quick succession of Subjugation from 18 to 20. And I also banged out Insurrection in like record time.

I've just been more motivated than usual to write, even at the expense of sleep. ;)
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My god I pull a couple of double shift at work and you throw chapters out like the canidates drop out of the running...now if we really want to be mean just call out the Tele tubbies and send them at Fel. :evil: :twisted: :lol:

Awsome writting and very good progression in how the characters work thru out the story so far; and I believe you can stop being worried about furry being a weak point in portfolio as this is turning out to be solid work. I would not say on par with previous stories but definitly not anything to be at all ashamed of.
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Well, I for one am quite glad that you are able to write both quickly and well. I'm impressed by this story, from many angles including seeing how your writing style has evolved over the years.

As for story title - I like the "through his eyes" thought - take the magazine article series and apply it to the whole story.

Is anyone out there interested in seeing what the comics would actually look like? I'm worse at drawing than I am breathing in a vacuum (except for technical stuff), so don't look to me for that :wink:

Again - Great work Fel - looking forward to the next installment.

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So who kiddies shot JR???????
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