THAT STORY (which I will disavow in public)...chapter 2.

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Eh, kinda forgot to post it, it's been done since last night. If not for the fact I went out of town yesterday afternoon to take a couch up to my uncle's house, I'd be done with chapter 3 as well. ;)
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You "forgot" to post it? Now that's just nasty... :roll:
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Fel wrote:Eh, kinda forgot to post it, it's been done since last night. If not for the fact I went out of town yesterday afternoon to take a couch up to my uncle's house, I'd be done with chapter 3 as well. ;)

Oh did you get to play with the Horse's <grin>


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thanks m8
please do remember chapter 3!!

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Phantom wrote:
Fel wrote:Eh, kinda forgot to post it, it's been done since last night. If not for the fact I went out of town yesterday afternoon to take a couch up to my uncle's house, I'd be done with chapter 3 as well. ;)

Oh did you get to play with the Horse's <grin>


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Eh, nope.

The uncle who owned the farm retired. He sold the farm and moved to Florida.

Fox's hatred of horses? That's directly off me. Having to care for those horses...BLEH. I hated them, they hated me, and we were all comfortable with that arrangement.

This uncle has some health issues that makes it hard for him to do anything that requires manual labor, but eh, that's what families are for. There's nothing wrong with my back.
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Fel wrote:
Phantom wrote:
Fel wrote:Eh, kinda forgot to post it, it's been done since last night. If not for the fact I went out of town yesterday afternoon to take a couch up to my uncle's house, I'd be done with chapter 3 as well. ;)
Oh did you get to play with the Horse's <grin>

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Eh, nope.

The uncle who owned the farm retired. He sold the farm and moved to Florida.

Fox's hatred of horses? That's directly off me. Having to care for those horses...BLEH. I hated them, they hated me, and we were all comfortable with that arrangement.
Yea you told me about you and your love of those horses several years ago ....Thats why I Just had to tease you about them

Well i have to say now after reading chapter 2 animorphic or not it looks like you have another Hit story started
here.

All though i love your Sci-Fi/Fanasty storys the most this one is getting to be real good too.


Your not going to let this be like that Weber and Ringo Series that shall not be named!
(the Emprie of man/ March series :shock: ) are you now <G> :roll: :wink:


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And in the fury of this darkest hour
I will be your light
A lifetime for this destiny
For I am Winter born
And in this moment..I will not run
It is my place to stand
We few shall carry hope
Within our bloodied hands
(bloodied hands)
And in our Dying, we're more alive-than we have ever been
I've lived for these few seconds
For I am Winter born
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Fel,
This story is only in the second chapter and I'm hooked. You've really hit on an awesome theme: kid from MEGA rich family, just trying to live outside that shadow. Definitely a hit in the making! Just keep writing so we don't have to rally an angry mob of readers on withdrawals! :twisted:
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For some reason chapter two is a lot nicer, bit "fluffy" though.
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You know Fel, Not that I have much experience dealing with Furry type stories, but with the way it's written, you could be talking about a White rich famliy who's disowned son was interested in a (black, Asian, Hispanic, etc.) girl, is that why people write Furry stories to show racism without calling it that directly?
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Hearly wrote:You know Fel, Not that I have much experience dealing with Furry type stories, but with the way it's written, you could be talking about a White rich famliy who's disowned son was interested in a (black, Asian, Hispanic, etc.) girl, is that why people write Furry stories to show racism without calling it that directly?
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And in the fury of this darkest hour
I will be your light
A lifetime for this destiny
For I am Winter born
And in this moment..I will not run
It is my place to stand
We few shall carry hope
Within our bloodied hands
(bloodied hands)
And in our Dying, we're more alive-than we have ever been
I've lived for these few seconds
For I am Winter born
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I'm really liking this book fel. Heh, with your love of horses, I wonder what a horse furry is going to be like in your world? :wink:
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Either:

1: dead.

2: dying.

3: running through the streets on fire.

4: all of the above.
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If 1, will they beat beating it?
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Hearly wrote:with the way it's written, you could be talking about a White rich famliy who's disowned son was interested in a (black, Asian, Hispanic, etc.) girl, is that why people write Furry stories to show racism without calling it that directly?
Well, you could also look at the basis of Subjugation in a similar light - The Blue skinned folks come from a foreign land, enslave the natives and make them work on farms.

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Two chapters of two different stories, and now we wait...at least I know it will be a short wait since Fel is mostly done with 3. Thank you for your great stories once again.
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