Its a good story, I like it. A refreashing departure from Fel's norm.
although the guns have started blazing
As for Fel's most recently entry into the evilness contest...not even close
Now if he ended the last chapter with
"gun pokes out of SUV, BLAM! BLAM!"
to be continued, it would be a much closer race to what Matthew Rielly pulled (and yes I'm still ranting about that). As it is, its not that bad and I only have to wait 3-4 weeks for the next chapter as opposed to the year I have to wait on Matthew Reilly.