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Fel
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Updatish II.

Post by Fel » Mon Sep 09, 2019 10:52 am

I should have a LOT to put up in a one or two weeks.

Last chapter, I introduced Kevin Ball and what he's doing over in the game, and this chapter of Revolution will reveal the end of the Grand Crusade and what happens during and after the final battle.

I don't want to spoil that ending in Revolution. I want Kevin's story to reveal that ending.

So, over the last couple of weeks or so, I've been busting my tail working on Kevin's story, and once I finish it up to a certain point, I'm going to release both the next chapter of Revolution and 7-8 chapters of the short story about Kevin, CO, and what happens to him.

I didn't write ALL of it over the last few days. I've actually been writing it for the last couple of months, just half a page here and a page there, when I'm not working on Revolution. I needed to so I had complete continuity between the two stories once Jason met Kevin, so I knew exactly where they were, what had happened, and the little details like Kevin's war with Rita before they became friends would match up with the other story. I've also had to do some major edits to it, because I changed some very important elements of the story to make Kevin look sufficiently like a badass with powerful and unique abilities befitting someone that does what he does, but not making him a Mary Sue.

So yeah, it's been a bit of a content drought. But when I'm ready to release everything, you're gonna get a TON of stuff to read.
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Re: Updatish II.

Post by GotToGo » Mon Sep 09, 2019 1:48 pm

Thanks Fel update!!! Also, how did the nerve testing go?

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Re: Updatish II.

Post by Blacktiger » Mon Sep 09, 2019 5:59 pm

7-8 chapters...... COOL! :mrgreen:

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Re: Updatish II.

Post by Eurasier » Mon Sep 09, 2019 9:22 pm

7-8 chapters... Maybe I should plan to have 1 or 2 days off... :D
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Re: Updatish II.

Post by Wolfee » Tue Sep 10, 2019 3:05 am

Fel wrote:
Mon Sep 09, 2019 10:52 am
I should have a LOT to put up in a one or two weeks.

Last chapter, I introduced Kevin Ball and what he's doing over in the game, and this chapter of Revolution will reveal the end of the Grand Crusade and what happens during and after the final battle.

I don't want to spoil that ending in Revolution. I want Kevin's story to reveal that ending.

So, over the last couple of weeks or so, I've been busting my tail working on Kevin's story, and once I finish it up to a certain point, I'm going to release both the next chapter of Revolution and 7-8 chapters of the short story about Kevin, CO, and what happens to him.

I didn't write ALL of it over the last few days. I've actually been writing it for the last couple of months, just half a page here and a page there, when I'm not working on Revolution. I needed to so I had complete continuity between the two stories once Jason met Kevin, so I knew exactly where they were, what had happened, and the little details like Kevin's war with Rita before they became friends would match up with the other story. I've also had to do some major edits to it, because I changed some very important elements of the story to make Kevin look sufficiently like a badass with powerful and unique abilities befitting someone that does what he does, but not making him a Mary Sue.

So yeah, it's been a bit of a content drought. But when I'm ready to release everything, you're gonna get a TON of stuff to read.
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Re: Updatish II.

Post by RobJ » Tue Sep 10, 2019 4:26 am

Sounds really great thanks Fel.

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Re: Updatish II.

Post by GotToGo » Tue Sep 10, 2019 7:34 pm

Fel,

Bring it on when your ready! And thanks for you do for us. :D

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Re: Updatish II.

Post by zooplbr » Tue Sep 10, 2019 10:16 pm

That's just fine!
More importantly how did the EMG go? any news re: nerve damage?

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Re: Updatish II.

Post by trodrian » Wed Sep 11, 2019 9:40 pm

Sounds wonderful, :)

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Re: Updatish II.

Post by NSC » Fri Sep 13, 2019 12:47 pm

I must say, I got all excited when I first saw this because I misread it as Kyven...

From what I'm seeing about Kevin, I'm still excited. :)

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Re: Updatish II.

Post by Fel » Tue Sep 17, 2019 8:29 pm

I MIGHT have the short story done and posted tomorrow (18 Sep). I have it done, but I've found a lot of continuity errors in the first chapter due to the major edits I made to it. I'll have to more or less read the entire thing carefully to proofread it and make sure I caught them all.

It runs 9 chapters, so it's going to take several hours to complete.

I won't have the next chapter of Revolution done, however. You'll only be getting the short story.

When I post it, it will go in the Short Stories forum. Watch for it there.
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Re: Updatish II.

Post by thalwous » Tue Sep 17, 2019 9:01 pm

no worries, take your time

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Re: Updatish II.

Post by imthejman85 » Tue Sep 17, 2019 10:05 pm

FIRST! Also, sounds good Fel. We can wait if/when needs be.
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Re: Updatish II.

Post by Exskie » Wed Sep 18, 2019 8:13 am

Hi Fel

Thanks for the update... looking forward to the new story. Just in time to get the mid-week hump...

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Re: Updatish II.

Post by trodrian » Mon Sep 23, 2019 6:17 am

Just finished reading all 9 chapters. You will continue it, yes?

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