Chapter Boundaries (Demons Bane)
Posted: Sat Apr 07, 2007 9:43 pm
I'm probably gonna get lynched for this, but here goes nuthin ...
Does anyone else feel that Fel hasn't chosen his chapter boundaries too well for the Demons Bane book?
Don't get me wrong, the story itself is plenty good enough, respect to Fel, and thanks for putting it out for all of us to read. I just feel that in general the DB chapters in general are too long -- I'm thinking each one should be shorter, with more chapters in the finished book.
XW
Does anyone else feel that Fel hasn't chosen his chapter boundaries too well for the Demons Bane book?
Don't get me wrong, the story itself is plenty good enough, respect to Fel, and thanks for putting it out for all of us to read. I just feel that in general the DB chapters in general are too long -- I'm thinking each one should be shorter, with more chapters in the finished book.
XW