Chapter Boundaries (Demons Bane)

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Chapter Boundaries (Demons Bane)

Post by wildph » Sat Apr 07, 2007 9:43 pm

I'm probably gonna get lynched for this, but here goes nuthin ...

Does anyone else feel that Fel hasn't chosen his chapter boundaries too well for the Demons Bane book?

Don't get me wrong, the story itself is plenty good enough, respect to Fel, and thanks for putting it out for all of us to read. I just feel that in general the DB chapters in general are too long -- I'm thinking each one should be shorter, with more chapters in the finished book.

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Re: Chapter Boundaries (Demons Bane)

Post by Fiferguy » Sat Apr 07, 2007 9:53 pm

**starts to look for some rope** :twisted:

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Re: Chapter Boundaries (Demons Bane)

Post by michaelsuave » Sun Apr 08, 2007 1:47 am

I have to say that I like the stopping spots that Fel leaves us. Personally I think it would be hard to stop at a different spot without some serious editting. I've looked through the last chapter, and if it was to be split in two I think you would have one longish chapter and one really short one. Ultimately though, I like the longer chapters because so much happens with each update. :D
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Re: Chapter Boundaries (Demons Bane)

Post by madathlon » Sun Apr 08, 2007 2:09 am

I started writing my own story, And I will tell you, its hard to find a good end to a chapter. it can really set the diffrence for the next chapters.
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