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Nice chapter.

Some lovely emotional support from a surprising direction. Gruesome details on his body improvements. Plenty of made up science stuff. A little clarification on "The Plan". Lots of little hints on possible future directions.

I’m getting excited!

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There is a 3rd possibly here though. Jason doesn't die but instead escapes by an alternative method while everyone thinks he's dead. This does all look to be building into a big reveal. I wonder if the Parri shaman will pop by to offer some words of wisdom before Jason heads off or will he reassure...

Jason forgot to ask a five year old (or seven year old Rann) to see if there were any flaws in his infallible plan.


See Evil Overlord's Checklist number 12.

This is a terrible plan.

I’m looking forward to how many ways it will go wrong (and right).

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In the previous chapter, Jason spent a lot of time worrying that he could make the same mistakes as the Consortium and end up becoming as heartless and ruthless as the Syndicate. So no. Is there a magic bullet? Probably not. He could possibly delay the inevitable by killing the entire leading counci...

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Addendum The Syndicate battle philosophy of space combat has been to build ships too big to disable. Presumably this was because the Consortium had a huge tech advantage when it recovered Karinne Faey and equipment from Exodus. The torsion beams were probably one shot one kill before they developed...

I know that for "allowing the story" reasons better-than-life-AI opponents aren't allowed, but man if that wasn't one of the single biggest things Fel did that I disagreed with. The problem with this whole argument is that there is an example of limited computer game style AI swarm droids being use...

IIRC the new Dreamer planet in the Milky Way will be weeks of hyperspace travel from the Confederacy worlds and behind interdictors. Currently only the Kimdori and Karinnes have the ability overcome or bypass the interdictors. The distance, along with hyperspace tracking (that possibly only a couple...

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