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by Dimwit
Wed Dec 10, 2014 9:54 pm
Forum: General Discussion
Topic: Subjugation Epub
Replies: 3
Views: 6407

Re: Subjugation Epub

That's one of the things I want feedback from. I've spellchecked, reformatted yadda, yadda, yadda. I've probably spent 20 hrs on the first two books that I've done. I was curious if anyone else wanted to see it. I didn't see the epubs at weavespinner. Well, damn. While I like my versions a little be...
by Dimwit
Wed Dec 10, 2014 11:40 am
Forum: General Discussion
Topic: Subjugation Epub
Replies: 3
Views: 6407

Subjugation Epub

I'm rereading from the beginning the complete saga. Obviously needing a project I decided to gather all the doc files into one doc... then make it an html... then realized I can make it an epub. So... after screwing around far too much I have Unification finished. Uhhhh, right, totally out of order....
by Dimwit
Mon Nov 03, 2008 1:12 am
Forum: General Discussion
Topic: Links to Good Reading (Part 2)
Replies: 452
Views: 758085

Re: Links to Good Reading (Part 2)

Two goodies from SoL: Summer Can Kill by Satyricon.21 I Won A Spaceship by Connard Wellingham. SCK is a conventional suspense type story set in Madrid while Spaceship is SciFi (d'oh!). Spceship is a two parter but he won't have the second written until late next year he figures. Still, each is excel...
by Dimwit
Sat Oct 04, 2008 7:01 pm
Forum: Kit
Topic: Kit, chapter 23.
Replies: 16
Views: 28759

Re: Kit, chapter 23.

There's one minor error. Pages in a magazine have to be divisible by 4. So the mag would go from 24 to either 36 or 40 pages.
by Dimwit
Sat Jan 27, 2007 1:11 am
Forum: Subjugation
Topic: Subjugation, chapter 20, and the book, is complete.
Replies: 47
Views: 57764

Re: Subjugation, chapter 20, and the book, is complete.

I'm soooo impressed! I'd hoped that you'd continue forever because Sub is a great read but you finished it up really nicely. I think that the community really, really owes you for all the fine work.

Thank you!

PS: it's basically, basically, BASICALLY!!!!!!!!!
by Dimwit
Sun Jan 21, 2007 5:26 pm
Forum: Subjugation Archive
Topic: House fighting
Replies: 8
Views: 16838

Re: House fighting

Jason has inherited a nitemare and it won't be easy to solve. His structure has to appeal to the rank and file -- a democracy? a republic? a monarchy? It could be any of them or something else. Whatever it is it has to curry favour quickly and then he has to watch out for the inevitable black ops te...
by Dimwit
Sun Jan 21, 2007 5:17 pm
Forum: Subjugation Archive
Topic: The Imperium's In Trouble - Can Jason save it?
Replies: 88
Views: 113556

Re: The Imperium's In Trouble - Can Jason save it?

Everyone has forgotten that Jyslin will be at Jason's side during his Court stint. Between the two of them it truly is a Fox in the henhouse isn't it? :) Jason has talent, tech and an outsider's view of a stagnant system. He also has the ear of a willing monarch and the advice from very interesting ...
by Dimwit
Mon Sep 04, 2006 2:10 am
Forum: General Discussion Archive
Topic: Demon's Bane, Chapter 7
Replies: 21
Views: 21996

Re: Demon's Bane, Chapter 7

Wow! Brilliant, just brilliant!
by Dimwit
Fri Dec 09, 2005 9:50 am
Forum: The Pyrosian Chronicles Archive
Topic: Question (Chapter 4 Demon's Bane Spoiler)
Replies: 50
Views: 50303

Re: Question (Chapter 4 Demon's Bane Spoiler)

I can see Jun becoming a High Priest. He's a sorcerer and I think that the mute thing is just a phase. He'll grow out of it, probably on Sennadar. Don't forget the dwarves. While they have 2 gods to worship now, after that battle Tarrin is pretty high up in their pantheon as well. One issue. That sh...
by Dimwit
Fri Dec 09, 2005 12:11 am
Forum: The Pyrosian Chronicles Archive
Topic: Tarrin vs. Spyder in nonlethal fight
Replies: 20
Views: 22968

Re: Tarrin vs. Spyder in nonlethal fight

One thing that everyone's forgetting. Tarrin's dead. When Dolanna loses faith he MUST get a body, quick. Where's the only body? Upstairs in Spyder's place. I don't think he needs to go through the gate, or at least as a corporeal being, since he won't be one. Tarrin's got a backdoor into Haven and h...
by Dimwit
Fri Dec 09, 2005 12:03 am
Forum: The Pyrosian Chronicles Archive
Topic: Question (Chapter 4 Demon's Bane Spoiler)
Replies: 50
Views: 50303

Re: Question (Chapter 4 Demon's Bane Spoiler)

Pyrosia isn't quite a blank slate but close. What it will take is either a God or someone to ascend to godhood and take control. With the elder god vacating the premises it's a wide open field. Only drawback I can see is that you give up where ever you're at to become the new domain. Hard on the Sen...
by Dimwit
Wed Dec 07, 2005 11:56 pm
Forum: The Pyrosian Chronicles Archive
Topic: Question (Chapter 4 Demon's Bane Spoiler)
Replies: 50
Views: 50303

Re: Question (Chapter 4 Demon's Bane Spoiler)

If I buy that, who is the barmaid? Either she's what she was, a mortal and you think that the GoG would need or want a mortal servant in the core? I doubt it. She could be an elder god, caught up in the politics, I'm thinking Ayise again. Or she's a totally new character. A new piece. God. Or Demon,...
by Dimwit
Tue Dec 06, 2005 11:09 am
Forum: The Pyrosian Chronicles Archive
Topic: Question (Chapter 4 Demon's Bane Spoiler)
Replies: 50
Views: 50303

Re: Question (Chapter 4 Demon's Bane Spoiler)

Just to be a PITA. Fear is more like it,” she answered evenly. “I’m fully restricted to the Outer plane I call home,” she explained. “Other gods may move between planes freely, but we’re not allowed." Who is "we" do you think? Just the Sennadar Gods? The elder gods? Everyone except Ay...
by Dimwit
Tue Dec 06, 2005 12:25 am
Forum: The Pyrosian Chronicles Archive
Topic: Question (Chapter 4 Demon's Bane Spoiler)
Replies: 50
Views: 50303

Re: Question (Chapter 4 Demon's Bane Spoiler)

That's not what the archon said. It's not that they can't, it's just not done because of the inherent risk. Gods like to play it safe it seems. While Tarrin is in his weaked state in the Crossroads I can see a powerful diety being able to hide their divinity from him. With so many Gods around the &q...
by Dimwit
Sun Dec 04, 2005 12:22 am
Forum: The Pyrosian Chronicles Archive
Topic: Question (Chapter 4 Demon's Bane Spoiler)
Replies: 50
Views: 50303

Re: Question (Chapter 4 Demon's Bane Spoiler)

The key question is when was Mother Wynn. If she was who she is now back in Book 1, then it can't be GoG. There's no way that: A/ He would be able to meddle on Sennadar's plane without at least the Elder Gods picking up his presence and; B/ That he would have time to fart around on any one plane giv...