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by bluemax65
Thu Jun 03, 2021 1:04 am
Forum: Subjugation
Topic: Revelation, Chapter 1.
Replies: 38
Views: 74868

Re: Revelation, Chapter 1.

My condolences on the passing of your mother.

Thank you for putting in the effort and continuing this story for us.
by bluemax65
Mon Sep 07, 2020 12:10 pm
Forum: Earth Bond
Topic: Cover
Replies: 4
Views: 11226

Re: Cover

A suggestion about other backgrounds. Farm land, the volcano idea, . Or a background of some buildings, with the "jungle" setting on one of the islands in the Hawaiian chain? This is kind of what I am talking about. https://www.bing.com/images/search?view=detailV2&ccid=8WF8f9IE&id...
by bluemax65
Sat Sep 05, 2020 10:21 pm
Forum: Short Stories
Topic: Citadel Online, chapter 11.
Replies: 19
Views: 37669

Re: Citadel Online, chapter 11.

Thank you Fel
by bluemax65
Fri May 29, 2020 2:40 pm
Forum: Earth Bond
Topic: Cover
Replies: 4
Views: 11226

Re: Cover

I have been thinking of something similar. There is too much white space on that cover. I wanted to put in some islands in the background and make the pics of the dragons a bit smaller. You comment about a volcano, is the perfect thing to add to this. I'll have to see if I can find the right kind of...
by bluemax65
Wed May 13, 2020 1:28 am
Forum: Earth Bond
Topic: Cover
Replies: 4
Views: 11226

Cover

So I have read all the chapters, available so far, and, just for me, I have edited them. The American English really jars when I'm reading the story. I then merged all chapters into one (on-going) book, then converted the saved document as a mobi file, so that I could read it on my tablet, Samsung G...
by bluemax65
Sat Mar 21, 2020 9:07 pm
Forum: Subjugation
Topic: Revolution, Chapter 12.
Replies: 31
Views: 58850

Re: Revolution, Chapter 12.

This is great. I will start to read from the very beginning, again. We aren't in lock down here, Antigua in the Caribbean, but business is slowing down so there is lots of free time.

Thanks for this Fell. Stay safe. (That includes everyone who is a fan of Fel's stories).
by bluemax65
Tue Jan 21, 2020 12:39 pm
Forum: Subjugation
Topic: Revolution, Chapter 11.
Replies: 27
Views: 47770

Re: Revolution, Chapter 11.

Thank you very much Fel.

You deserve a a long restful sleep (or whatever.. in bed).

Make sure you are well rested so you can get a good start to the next chapter, that we are all looking forward to.
by bluemax65
Thu Dec 26, 2019 3:45 am
Forum: Subjugation
Topic: Revolution, Chapter 10.
Replies: 26
Views: 44959

Re: Revolution, Chapter 10.

Merry Christmas and a happy new year.

Thank you for this Christmas present.
by bluemax65
Tue Nov 26, 2019 4:03 pm
Forum: General Discussion
Topic: Amazon kindle?
Replies: 11
Views: 16881

Re: Amazon kindle?

I have to, generally, agree with everyone here, so far. I believe that Fel deserves to get some compensation for all the great stories and writing he has produced. I, with a bunch of others fans/avid readers, managed to needle I mean convince, yes convince, another great writer (Geoff Wolak), to sel...
by bluemax65
Wed Oct 16, 2019 1:09 am
Forum: Short Stories
Topic: Citadel Online.
Replies: 40
Views: 69469

Re: Citadel Online.

Thank you.
by bluemax65
Tue Oct 15, 2019 12:29 pm
Forum: Short Stories
Topic: Citadel Online.
Replies: 40
Views: 69469

Re: Citadel Online.

Part of it. Telling and much expanding some backstory used in Subjugation from a new POV. I'd say Subjugation makes sense without it but publishing this short story between chapters 6 and 7 makes much sense since it slots in there. Thank you. Sorry, just to be clear. This story fits in between Ince...
by bluemax65
Mon Oct 14, 2019 12:22 pm
Forum: Short Stories
Topic: Citadel Online.
Replies: 40
Views: 69469

Re: Citadel Online.

Chasm wrote: Wed Oct 09, 2019 6:21 pm Part of it.
Telling and much expanding some backstory used in Subjugation from a new POV.

I'd say Subjugation makes sense without it but publishing this short story between chapters 6 and 7 makes much sense since it slots in there.
Thank you.
by bluemax65
Wed Oct 09, 2019 4:58 pm
Forum: Short Stories
Topic: Citadel Online.
Replies: 40
Views: 69469

Re: Citadel Online.

Is this part of the Subjugation "universe" or a separate/different story?
by bluemax65
Fri Aug 16, 2019 3:13 am
Forum: Subjugation
Topic: Revolution, Chapter 6.
Replies: 33
Views: 56005

Re: Revolution, Chapter 6.

Thank you very much.
by bluemax65
Tue Aug 06, 2019 5:22 pm
Forum: Subjugation
Topic: Revolution, Chapter 5.
Replies: 24
Views: 42597

Re: Revolution, Chapter 5.

Fel wrote: Mon Aug 05, 2019 12:21 pm I can't remember if I spellchecked it or not. So if you see any typos, that means I forgot.

Enjoy.
Thank you very much for this.

Don't worry about spellchecking or typos. I usually go through them first looking for stuff like that. I make the corrections then read them.