Subjugation, chapter 15.

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Subjugation, chapter 15.

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I kinda rushed it a little, but it's done enough.

I hope you guys like it, cause I had a blast writing this one. ;)

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yes!!!!!!!!!! omg fel you rock i finally have something to read!
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Fel, this is such a great freaking Chapter, You better write the next one before Bane 9..


heh, I just gotta see how she handles the next group of His toys..
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WAAAAHHOOOOOOOO!!!!!!!!!

Thank You...

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Classic. I loved the chapter, te little war of Jasons was superb, and I can't wait for more of the competition to happen.

Thebit with the bouncy balls was great.

I hope you write the next chapter soon, i was practilly in stiches near the end. Looking forward to chapter 16 soon.
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LOL! Myeena's hissy fit an the end was HILARIOUS!

Excellent job Fel, you have proved your awesomeness yet again.
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MARBLES! F@#%ING MARBLES!!!!!!!
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As teh fiferfellaw said...
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On another note, have a good thanksgiving!
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Asante bwana! ( thank you in swahili)

Much appreciated.

Happy thanksgiving. Not being American I am not very sure what thanks giving is. Is it a season when you thank God for his goodness or somethign like that? of late the only thing those of us who watch TV can tell about thanksgiving is that there must be a Turkey...sort of like the way Christmas is about shopping and presents these days.
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Yahhoooooooooooo!!!! (Texian for Yahoo!)

Now do I want to stay up until 3am to read it??? hmmmmm.... YUP.
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oh man!! Did I look weird laughing at my desk in office once I got to the part about the marbles!! Fel, this was more than great!! I really have enjoyed myself. still have tears running down my cheeks because of laughter.
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Hot damn! Man, that's gotta be the funniest and BEST chapter ever written.

Seriously - it absolutely ROCKED.
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This is kinde freaky you know.

I just reread whole subjugation yesterday even though i was halfway in some other stories i just had to reread subjugation.... and then the day after Fell posts a new chapter... creepy

But now im gonna read this :)
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afrigeek wrote:Happy thanksgiving. Not being American I am not very sure what thanks giving is. Is it a season when you thank God for his goodness or somethign like that? of late the only thing those of us who watch TV can tell about thanksgiving is that there must be a Turkey...sort of like the way Christmas is about shopping and presents these days.
I'm not American either, so had no real idea about it...

Thanksgiving, according to Wikipedia:
Thanksgiving, or Thanksgiving Day is an annual one-day holiday to give thanks (traditionally to God) at the close of the harvest season. In the United States, Thanksgiving is celebrated on the fourth Thursday of November.
...looks like you wern't far off.
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Its a wild rocking chapter. I have this stupid grin on my face that i am absolutely unable to wipe off. Fel you got my dying to read the next installment..
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