Revelation, Chapter 11.

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Revelation, Chapter 11.

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Here it is.

If anyone finds any problems with the chapter, lemme know. It was saved half on the old laptop and half on the new one. If there were any issues with it being saved across two different Word versions, I need to know.

Sorry it took so long.

Enjoy.
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nice! thanks a ton!
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Thanks!
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Awesome. Can’t wait to read, Fel. Thanks as always!!!
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Thanks!!!
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Thank you Good Sir, for this chapter and all the previous chapters in your tales.
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Awesome! TY Fel!
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Awesome!

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Thx Fel!!
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Thank you very much Fel.
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Thank Fel :mrgreen:
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And yeah, already found an editing error. I thought I deleted those two paragraphs, it must not have taken or something.

It's nothing major, you guys just get to see that I changed Estrella's dance scene from something passive to something active.

I'll chalk that up to moving to the new laptop. I didn't read the chapter to proofread it this time, I was too busy tinkering with Word.
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Oh joy! Christmas came early!

Thanks Fel!
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felfan3000 wrote: Sun Dec 11, 2022 2:59 pm Oh joy! Christmas came early!

Thanks Fel!
Indeed, it has ! Thank you Fel for being such an awesome storyteller all these many years now. I wish you and everybody else on this board a very mery xmas and a happy new year
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Thanks Fel!!
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