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Oh sure. Go create another series that I have to read.

As feedback, you might want to trim the info about his home a bit. Not much as it seems to flesh him out a bit but it got a little repetitive. His plans as to football (soccer) also.

Enjoyed this test very much.
Whyy

SoronelHaetir wrote:FEL,

Thanks for finding my story worthy of being posted.

Good story, excellent excellent writing. Kept me reading.
One question. What happened to the old girl friend Onilia?

She walks off with Father and is gone.

Does this mean you are writing a second part?

You just made my weekend. Thanks for chapter 17.

Ok first post on the forum for me. :) I would definitely think hard about NOT getting separate Nvidia/ATI graphics and going with integrated Intel graphics instead. Intel graphics use dramatically less power because there is no fast separate graphics chip+graphics ram. .....snipped.... 17'' for a pu...